Week 3 - Thursday

I showed my teacher the posters I made for last class and she said they were good (obviously need more developing) but her main critique was that you couldn't really tell the posters were supposed to be NZ based or about NZ- so I needed to make it more obviously 'New Zealand'.

I also think I need to refine my topic a little more and put some facts on my next poster to add interest and some what of a 'punch line'.

Unfortunately I had to leave this class early as I was feeling sick but Im glad I got to discuss with my tutor before I did. I plan to keep working on it at home and try to refine my ideas as well as my illustrations.


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